Chapter: Issue 2

0069 Issues

You know you’ve successfully created a well-rounded character when they hijack your expository/setup scene and fill it with their abandonment issues.

0067 POV

Robert (check the comments) suggested I should focus less on the backgrounds to move things along. Sorry, Robert. I didn’t do that. Basically, what happened is that a very long time ago I created the backgrounds that make up Rey’s apartment. Then I reused some assets by opening that file, […]

0066 That Drink

One possible solution to the pacing problem: Bigger comic. Downside: requires more art. Upside: doesn’t take that much longer to produce. We shall see how this goes,

0062 A Decent Proposal

Unplanned week off. It’s not that I don’t care about feeding my audience because I do. I don’t want to talk about it.

0061 Needling

I’m often conflicted about what the characters should actually say.  I try to be good about balancing the characters’ personality with the exposition and to be careful about having them tell each other things they’d already know. I recently had a short discussion about “show, don’t tell,” and it occurred to me […]

0060 Exposition Position

And we’re back! That was (not) a relaxing bit of time off. Still, progress was made. The next few pages will answer some of the questions the previous 59 have raised. Only some. I can, however, promise you which question will not be answered: Which questions are being answered here. […]